So, I've just finished reading the first fantasy-fiction attempt by a friend. It's obviously his first attempt. But this isn't the place to discuss his plot motivation, or character concepts, or maturity of writing. It's just that this is the thing that got me thinking about the eternal quest of the writer, to be 'better'. There are so many interesting things to read out there. But, and I know I'm parroting all my favourite authors here, the only things that will really help you improve is to write. And write, and write, and write.