Original sentence: Something aroused him and he surged erect, eyes wide open.
Ahem?
Suggested alteration: Something roused him and he surged to his feet, eyes wide open.
The delicate art of editing in action!
Death comes for us all (a melodramatic haiku of retirement)
Ahem?
Suggested alteration: Something roused him and he surged to his feet, eyes wide open.
The delicate art of editing in action!
Alas! this blog is
no longer where it is at.
Onwards! (Back to home.)
guts and garters
It's all fun and games until someone loses molecular cohesion.
Friday, September 10, 2004
Ahem?
Suggested alteration: Something roused him and he surged to his feet, eyes wide open.
The delicate art of editing in action!
GIRL
Diana Evans
called Dee
since May 25th, 1980
terrorising inner-city Melbourne
consuming flat whites
producing words, hers and other people's
contact dee [at] viscerate [dot] com
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