I spent last week in Adelaide. This coming weekend, I'm going to Brisbane for my cousin's wedding. Weekend after that, we're entertaining interstate visitors. Is this the jet-setting lifestyle I always dreamed of having? Can one actually
jet-set with Virgin?
I'm not afraid of asking the hard questions.
*At the top of my "notes to myself on how to fix the novel", it says
More fanplay & hippos.
I think this just about sums it up.
I'd almost forgotten about the hippos (as much as one can, anyway). They get passing references - at one point, for instance there's a market stall selling charms to keep hippos away, which I will
never ever remove, because I find it hilarious - but never appear. Just before we fled to Adelaide, however, I caught up with one of Anthony's old workmates, who asked (as had been her wont whenever we met) how the hippos were going. I realised I'd finished and polished the whole thing with nary a grey nose to be seen.
She was rather upset. Hippos, she felt, were a prime point of difference for my novel in a horse/dragon/talking cats-filled genre. She's never even heard of a fantasy novel with hippos in. There should be hippos.
She has a point. Part of what I believe makes my novel saleable - apart from its delicacy of expression, strength of character arc, innovative magic use and the fact I'm a fucking
genius - is its unique jungle-mangrove-monsoon setting and the uses I make of it. And yet I haven't included the hippos.
Now that I think of it, there aren't any visible alligators either, apart from that pygmy one being bought at the market. I haven't even got any monkeys. Good god, I FAIL.
The problem with including hippos is that... well, they're hippos. They're big, somnolent, nine-tenths below the water (it's not just for icebergs any more) and the most bloody dangerous creatures on the planet. At various points in the writing of the novel, Anthony and I have had a variety of ridiculous discussions about hippos every time I considered inserting them into the story. Hippos on the canal/river? Havoc wrought upon trade/passenger craft/our heroine. Hippo-baiting as a sport? They never found anything but splinters of the grandstand and a blood-stained flag.
The "crocodiles look a bit like logs and hippos are herbivores" conversation was, even for us, a gem of the art of hilarity.
Fans? Fans have never, in the history of the world, rolled over and bitten a boat in half. Fans are
easy. But you keep away from hippos. "You", in this case, alas, probably includes my characters and plot, despite my handwritten exhortation to the contrary.
I should definitely do something about the alligators, monkeys, parrots, snakes, insects and little furry critters, however.